NMR
Nomura Holdings, Inc
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I think your experience section could be improved a lot. Currently the 3 project are unbalanced, and in many cases, you give too many details (that are probably is not meaningful for the reader), while in other cases the actual achievements are missing.

Research Internship: The structure and message of the points is good, but I think you give too much numerical data and technical specifics of the NMR probe. Use numbers to demonstrate the scale of your work, accuracy/precision, or use percentages to quantify improvement, e.g. reduced memory requirement by 70%.. You say you reduced modeled peak acceleration by 0.52%, but it would be good to explain how significant this improvement is.
Material Science Summer School: The way it is written, it is not obvious whether this was even an experimental or a simulation project. It is also not clear how you did all this and what you achieved.
Materials Engineering Summer School: Here the wording is good, but you could also add more info about the outcome and the techniques you used. Currently you only tell about your responsibility, but not about what you have built.

I think your experience section could be improved a lot. Currently the 3 project are unbalanced, and in many cases, you give too many details (that are probably is not meaningful for the reader), while in other cases the actual achievements are missing.

Research Internship: The structure and message of the points is good, but I think you give too much numerical data and technical specifics of the NMR probe. Use numbers to demonstrate the scale of your work, accuracy/precision, or use percentages to quantify improvement, e.g. reduced memory requirement by 70%.. You say you reduced modeled peak acceleration by 0.52%, but it would be good to explain how significant this improvement is.
Material Science Summer School: The way it is written, it is not obvious whether this was even an experimental or a simulation project. It is also not clear how you did all this and what you achieved.
Materials Engineering Summer School: Here the wording is good, but you could also add more info about the outcome and the techniques you used. Currently you only tell about your responsibility, but not about what you have built.